Ying Yang Love
Heh,
Take a peek at this new one. See if you can relate to it somehow. We've all been down that road at sometime or another. Smart thing is to know when to get off that road when there are too many speed bumps and debris along the way....enjoy.
http://deanthepoet.com/pages/shorts/ying_yang_love.htm
Jean-Pierre, Dean
www.deanthpoet.com
posted by Dean @ 8/31/2006 12:34:00 AM
1 Comments:
an excellently written essay on love and passion, very different from your other stories—your last paragraph needs unpacking of all those giving/taking/glass metaphors that are all cluttered up. Also the last line is a needless moral that (despite your claim) does not really follow from what you have said before, which is far more ambiguous and penetrating than the reassuring ‘all experiences are worth it.’ All and all, it is a very eloquent circumlocution to say that loving and being loved is the ultimate experience for one’s emotional health, *but* it still doesn’t cut it compared to playing the field and being constantly stimulated by new desires and lust. Fair enough…
A Midwestern fan
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